NO.
do not do that. I just saw the first incomplete thing.... and it wasn't horrible. Now you send this like the next day without taking peoples advice of the first one. I hate that song... it is gay, plain and simple. The faces look bad, just get rid of them. Next, you added like a half a second of new animation, theres no point in submitting this. Im not saying your animation is bad, it wasnt bad at all. But you didn't even improve what you had before based on peoples advice to you.
dont send this incomplete thing again. Just finish it.
you can also use some of the advice you are going to get while you are at it.